#poetry Haiku #4 Dawn

” Your rays crawl in, shy

Beneath blankets of grey clouds

Giggling, bringing us hope “


Do notice that I try to write Haiku in the traditional Japanese way, so the structure of the 3 lines are 5-7-5 syllables. I will soon experiment with variations to express better. And this is a 5-7-6 syllable one.

Let me know what you think.